Major Revisions In Chapter 11 And Some Thoughts
by lemuel moo
August 7, 2018
I have just included a segment where I introduced the origins of the Flowers Of Death organization for Chapter 11 and a lot more descriptions with details. Even though I like foreshadowing events and background, doing it too much may have a counter effect, and it’s significant enough to cause an impact to the story, therefore I thought I should let you know here.
I will be doing significant revisions throughout the novel because I needed to be more descriptive regarding storytelling. These are just some of the improvements that I should work on since I had editors telling me about my flaws in my writing.
Let me know if some of these revisions work for you.